ZacharyBuilds's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Going Down in Fishstory]

It's adorable and I love it

[sky high]

It's promising! I think my biggest complaints are that the balloons are pretty finnicky and that there isn't much in the sky (why have movement controls when you're practically never going to use them?)

NonGMOTrash responds:

if you limit yourself to only 2 or 3 balloons you can wiggle around a bit
thanks for the review!

[Disc Ball Room]

It's promising, but the controls definitely need some work. Maybe allow the player to use the mouse to control the character? If you're dead set on the current controls, then maybe consider tweaking the avatar so that you know which way it's going.

[Fly High]

There are two things that really bug me here. Namely, those vibrating things I choose to describe as walls. They're a tad distracting and I fail to understand why they are there. You might consider doing something with them, but that's really not something some random on the internet should have a great say in.

There's also the issue of controls. You should really consider putting a description or an additional screen stating the controls, because I still don't know what they are. Is it supposed to be the arrow keys? WASD? Does the ship's nose follow the pointer, or does it move with the scroll wheel? All of these seemed to do something and nothing at the same time.

Thanks for reading this whole thing, and I'm quite sorry if I came across a bit harsh

Chuckykillr responds:

Hi, thank you for the great feedback. You were not harsh at all. :) I will be sure to get those issues first and upload v2 :)

[V2 Platformer]

Not bad, you should probably look into either changing the controls to wasd or fixing it so that jumping doesn't scroll up in the site

TheFrontFlipKeper responds:

I don't think I can change the controls, but a new update is coming today with a new boss!

[Dodge Jump]

It's kinda like Flappy Bird, but with less information. You might consider showing the obstacles a bit earlier so there's enough time for the player to react

EwaltzYT responds:

Thank you for your feedback! I'm trying to implement features from people who play the game!

[show]

Absolutely amazing

[Crazy Balloon]

It's good! The game is really well made, you may want to add something telling the controls/how to start the game.